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Once upon atime, in a land far far away, there lived a princes called Emie. One day, Emie visit the palace guard because she wanted to ask him about how he kept his armor so shiny.
To her horror, the palace guard telling her that she had no decorum and that she should go home straight away, take some lessons on etiquette, and try again another day.
Emie is very upset with the guard’s reaction. She went home and wrote in her dairy to complain about him. “Dear diary,” she wrote.. “I dont like the palace guard. He make me very angry today. I hope that he will explod one day.”
The next day when Emie woke up, she heard a loud commotion around the drawbridge.
She put on a dress and rushed outisde.
“What is happening? What is happening?” she cried in a shrill voice.
“Look here! The guard going to explode!” said the King’s advisor, Lindy. Emie gape at the guard. He had turned into a huge baloon and was now floating across the moat, to a place far far away.
He floated and floated until he was a mere speck of shiny armor in the sky, when suddenly…
BOOM!
The guard exploded and bits and pieces of armor fell everywhere. As it fell, the steel armer turned into gold and the townspeople were happy (or so they thought; they experienced terrible inflation afterwords and the kingdom was in chaos).
The end.
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